tbaugerud Posted February 28, 2008 Share Posted February 28, 2008 Guys, I'm back with yet another brilliant song...well, DEMO that is..Listen to it and tell me what you think..If you like rock n roll, I think you'll like it..If you want it, please ask for it and we'll arrange something!A tribute to Axl - Pile of dirt Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assassin's Creed Posted February 28, 2008 Share Posted February 28, 2008 Vocal arrangement is very bad , ruined the song , the song doesnt have a very strong structure , its quite messy.Id reccomend you stick to the intro verse chorus bridge chorus etc , structure. btw , is that a drum program , or real drumming , if its a program , what it is called? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tbaugerud Posted February 28, 2008 Author Share Posted February 28, 2008 Vocal arrangement is very bad , ruined the song , the song doesnt have a very strong structure , its quite messy.Id reccomend you stick to the intro verse chorus bridge chorus etc , structure. btw , is that a drum program , or real drumming , if its a program , what it is called?The drums are called "You're a moron"... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevdo242 Posted February 28, 2008 Share Posted February 28, 2008 The vocals are pretty gash. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assassin's Creed Posted February 28, 2008 Share Posted February 28, 2008 Hey dude , drop the arrogance , you wanted opinions , i gave you mine , and as a listener of good music , this didint strike me as anything promising , as i said , poor structure , crappy production and vocals wich are very unfocused. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tbaugerud Posted February 28, 2008 Author Share Posted February 28, 2008 Well...take it easy man...I know a bit about making music myself, and that's why I'm quite proud about this song.Why?Because I recorded it using (hold on): a fake Fender with one working mic, a piano for bass, a karaoke $20 vocal mic and Line 6's cheapest one-channeled sound card.That puts some perspective on it, and I'm quite surprised at how well it sounded.Oh, and by the way, the drums are LeafDrums. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assassin's Creed Posted February 28, 2008 Share Posted February 28, 2008 Do you really expect the listener to now that? , infact do you think it matters what equipment you use? , i wasnt tlaking about the sound , the "structure" and vocal structure are whats wrong , the riff isnt bad however the song as a whole has a messy unfocused structure. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tbaugerud Posted February 28, 2008 Author Share Posted February 28, 2008 No, but if I was a pro I wouldn't care to post my songs in here I think... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assassin's Creed Posted February 28, 2008 Share Posted February 28, 2008 Yes but your post was false advertisement wouldnt you day? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tbaugerud Posted February 28, 2008 Author Share Posted February 28, 2008 Brilliant? Come on.... Rock with drive? That I really do think.. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FunkyMonk Posted February 29, 2008 Share Posted February 29, 2008 I liked it . Do you have any "real" songs with a band or whatever? I kinda dug that one...even though you were probably only fucking around. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver Posted February 29, 2008 Share Posted February 29, 2008 not to spoil the fight you guys are having here but I enjoyed this song.. and you said the drums are LeafDrums, that's very promising drums for a program, only one part where it's obvious they're computer drums.very sudden ending though, but this is a really cool song for a song you were probably just fucking around with, good work. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
highvoltage Posted March 1, 2008 Share Posted March 1, 2008 Vocal arrangement is very bad , ruined the song , the song doesnt have a very strong structure , its quite messy.Id reccomend you stick to the intro verse chorus bridge chorus etc , structure. btw , is that a drum program , or real drumming , if its a program , what it is called?As opposed to the "music" you've posted here before?Hahahaha. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assassin's Creed Posted March 1, 2008 Share Posted March 1, 2008 Oh its you again , Still got that stick up your ass i see.The music i posted was posted when i was an enthusiastic naive beginner nearly a year ago. , so yea , it is better , but what i got know , is better than what ull ever have , cuz u quit and i carried on my timid friend. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
highvoltage Posted March 1, 2008 Share Posted March 1, 2008 Oh its you again , Still got that stick up your ass i see.The music i posted was posted when i was an enthusiastic naive beginner nearly a year ago. , so yea , it is better , but what i got know , is better than what ull ever have , cuz u quit and i carried on my timid friend. So post it? And how would you know what I do or don't do? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assassin's Creed Posted March 1, 2008 Share Posted March 1, 2008 Ill post it when im good n ready. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
tbaugerud Posted March 3, 2008 Author Share Posted March 3, 2008 I liked it . Do you have any "real" songs with a band or whatever? I kinda dug that one...even though you were probably only fucking around.Just added another song in this section, Funky Monk. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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