Perfect_crime49 Posted May 1, 2008 Share Posted May 1, 2008 Well its just a rough version, has yet to be mastered would like some feedback negative or positive.song Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FunkyMonk Posted May 2, 2008 Share Posted May 2, 2008 My feedback: Positive. Pretty awesome, really loved the guitar and drums, vocals were a bit iffy sometimes, but others they flowed really well and it sounded cool; I would say that might have come down to the lyrics being a bit tricky though maybe? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inverted Mind Posted May 2, 2008 Share Posted May 2, 2008 put it in myspace or putfile or something Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assassin's Creed Posted May 2, 2008 Share Posted May 2, 2008 The song in its self is okay if your going to play at a bar.Not if you want a record contract or such , it lacks that memroble hook , that eventful chorus that poeple should remember and sing along too.guitars are okay , not with the times , but ok. it sounds like a song ud hear somewhere ona STP album , not one theyd release as a single though.look at slither , thats a nice structured hookin song. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FunkyMonk Posted May 2, 2008 Share Posted May 2, 2008 it sounds like a song ud hear somewhere ona STP albumExactly, hence why it is awesome. Don't let this guy tell you where you can and can't play . Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assassin's Creed Posted May 2, 2008 Share Posted May 2, 2008 it sounds like a song ud hear somewhere ona STP albumExactly, hence why it is awesome. Don't let this guy tell you where you can and can't play .Dont let this obviously un educated in the music business area twit, tell you what you want to hear.i gave u what u need to hear,take it or not , thats your business. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Perfect_crime49 Posted May 2, 2008 Author Share Posted May 2, 2008 Thanks for your feedback FM appreciated wasn't expecting any. AC thanks to I know what you mean about having no chorus hook totally agree with it.STP album comment Im down with that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FunkyMonk Posted May 2, 2008 Share Posted May 2, 2008 Dont let this obviously un educated in the music business area twit, tell you what you want to hear.Not to steal this thread BUT:I admit I'm not "educated" in the music business, but that's not to say you are either. Aren't you like 14? Yeah, I'm sure you're well educated. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver Posted May 3, 2008 Share Posted May 3, 2008 Dont let this obviously un educated in the music business area twit, tell you what you want to hear.Not to steal this thread BUT:I admit I'm not "educated" in the music business, but that's not to say you are either. Aren't you like 14? Yeah, I'm sure you're well educated.he's 17, perhaps he took a school course in music :xmasssanta: on the other hand.. do you have this song on MySpace or such? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Perfect_crime49 Posted May 3, 2008 Author Share Posted May 3, 2008 Dont let this obviously un educated in the music business area twit, tell you what you want to hear.Not to steal this thread BUT:I admit I'm not "educated" in the music business, but that's not to say you are either. Aren't you like 14? Yeah, I'm sure you're well educated.he's 17, perhaps he took a school course in music :xmasssanta: on the other hand.. do you have this song on MySpace or such?Theres the Myspace Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Revolver Posted May 3, 2008 Share Posted May 3, 2008 Dont let this obviously un educated in the music business area twit, tell you what you want to hear.Not to steal this thread BUT:I admit I'm not "educated" in the music business, but that's not to say you are either. Aren't you like 14? Yeah, I'm sure you're well educated.he's 17, perhaps he took a school course in music :xmasssanta: on the other hand.. do you have this song on MySpace or such?Theres the Myspaceyeah I gave it a listen.. and I have to agree with the Stone Temple Pilots comment.. not in a bad way, it's full of youth and it's pretty cool, think the vocals should be stronger after the solo.. like the melody and I think it works alright without the crazy hooks, maybe not a single material but pretty cool as I said before B) Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assassin's Creed Posted May 4, 2008 Share Posted May 4, 2008 Dont let this obviously un educated in the music business area twit, tell you what you want to hear.Not to steal this thread BUT:I admit I'm not "educated" in the music business, but that's not to say you are either. Aren't you like 14? Yeah, I'm sure you're well educated.he's 17, perhaps he took a school course in music :xmasssanta: on the other hand.. do you have this song on MySpace or such?Actually no , part of my dream to become a succesful musician has not only been instruments and shredding , i go read success story's , read what makes you success , goto billboards check out the hits and study there accesability , thats it.When you model ur skill into simplicity ina song ,you move to step 1. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Perfect_crime49 Posted May 4, 2008 Author Share Posted May 4, 2008 Dont let this obviously un educated in the music business area twit, tell you what you want to hear.Not to steal this thread BUT:I admit I'm not "educated" in the music business, but that's not to say you are either. Aren't you like 14? Yeah, I'm sure you're well educated.he's 17, perhaps he took a school course in music :xmasssanta: on the other hand.. do you have this song on MySpace or such?Actually no , part of my dream to become a succesful musician has not only been instruments and shredding , i go read success story's , read what makes you success , goto billboards check out the hits and study there accesability , thats it.When you model ur skill into simplicity ina song ,you move to step 1.My motivation is not to get a record deal its about having fun playing music with your mates, it shouldn't be worrying about a hit that may never come, and thanks revolver. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr.b Posted May 8, 2008 Share Posted May 8, 2008 Liked it, tapped my foot anyways. Thats not really feed back, soo am, maybe your singer could kick it up a notch, bit more effort like. Other then that I liked it... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Perfect_crime49 Posted May 9, 2008 Author Share Posted May 9, 2008 Liked it, tapped my foot anyways. Thats not really feed back, soo am, maybe your singer could kick it up a notch, bit more effort like. Other then that I liked it...Thank you, i agree about the singing. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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