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12 hours ago, matt_phoenixfactor said:

I’m taking a crack at some industrial type tracks for my next project and this is the first track.  Your thoughts are as always much appreciated



Thought it was awesome. IMO, if the breakdown/Bridge at the end was shorter it could add more urgency to the final chorus (under the old songwriting adage, “don't bore us, get us to the chorus"), ie, come back in at    2.17 and not 2.29.  Regardless, love the instrumentation and song melody, great hook. 

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