matt_phoenixfactor Posted August 21, 2021 Share Posted August 21, 2021 I’m taking a crack at some industrial type tracks for my next project and this is the first track. Your thoughts are as always much appreciated https://m.soundcloud.com/dirtycompany-152869576/i-disintegrate 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lame ass security Posted August 22, 2021 Share Posted August 22, 2021 Very cool man, love the way it kicks in there in the final stanza. Your voice really climbs there, sounds really good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jimisbatman Posted August 22, 2021 Share Posted August 22, 2021 12 hours ago, matt_phoenixfactor said: I’m taking a crack at some industrial type tracks for my next project and this is the first track. Your thoughts are as always much appreciated https://m.soundcloud.com/dirtycompany-152869576/i-disintegrate Thought it was awesome. IMO, if the breakdown/Bridge at the end was shorter it could add more urgency to the final chorus (under the old songwriting adage, “don't bore us, get us to the chorus"), ie, come back in at 2.17 and not 2.29. Regardless, love the instrumentation and song melody, great hook. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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