estranged2004 Posted February 17, 2005 Share Posted February 17, 2005 I just wanted to put up a demo from my band and see what you guys think. I put it up a while back but the song has changed. Let me know if you have any imput.http://www.garageband.com/song?|pe1|S8LTM0LdsaSkZVC_ZGE Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
GnRmaniac Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 It sounds pretty good at first, but it seems like it needs to have a heavy chorus, instead of having the same feel through out the whole song. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mister_Bo Posted February 18, 2005 Share Posted February 18, 2005 not bad not bad. Guitar sounds cool, but I have to agree with GnRmaniac about having the same feel throughout the whole song. Also, I think the vocal melody needs a bit of improvement. Singers good, but I think there's a lot of room to write a decent vocal line over that guitar part, and you're not taking advantage of it. Cool that you posted it tho. Keep it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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