G.V.R Posted April 18, 2005 Share Posted April 18, 2005 heres part of some lyrics ive wrote,im not Axl,im not Elton John,i just write what comes out of my head,im not a great writer but id like your opinouns on what i think is my best lyric wise song.Succubus...Brown eyesbrown hairnice tight asslovely legs n'skin so fairoh yeah oh yeahYa a bitch but i dont care i was caught in ya evil glareoh yeah oh yeahBein with you was like a nightmarei cant run no,but i dont care,ohi cant run no,but i dont care,ohstrangled by ya long brown hair,oh yeah oh yeahoh ya my brown eyed girl,go on baby give us a twirloh yeah oh yeah...BITCHeverything you say n'do i despise and all you touch just withers n diesim to wraped up in ya long brown hair own that evil glare oh yeah oh yeahit captivates my soul,but thats the price you pay,i cant run awaysold my soul to the devil the very next day,now how can i get awayleave it all behind...find a better day,oh a better way to live....ahG.V.R. 14/10/02 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SofaKingWhat Posted April 18, 2005 Share Posted April 18, 2005 Some lines just makes me think of other songs, like brown eyes girl, sold my soul to the devil. and the oh yeah oh yeah reminds of nirvana pish,Other than that, i dont know. I dont care if a song has good bad lyrics, just so long as the music is good. (hence why i like iron maiden).Anyway... wrong forum section sir. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G.V.R Posted April 18, 2005 Author Share Posted April 18, 2005 Some lines just makes me think of other songs, like brown eyes girl, sold my soul to the devil. and the oh yeah oh yeah reminds of nirvana pish,Other than that, i dont know. I dont care if a song has good bad lyrics, just so long as the music is good. (hence why i like iron maiden).Anyway... wrong forum section sir. i will take nirvana as a compliment,our lyrics aint deep,we just wana Rock out shout n scream smash shit up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
love&hates Posted April 18, 2005 Share Posted April 18, 2005 I see you really have problems with womens.But i kinda like the lyric , i think that if you have good players, you know a nice guitar sound, etc..... you can have a good song .Rock on Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
G.V.R Posted April 18, 2005 Author Share Posted April 18, 2005 I see you really have problems with womens.But i kinda like the lyric , i think that if you have good players, you know a nice guitar sound, etc..... you can have a good song .Rock on Thankyou,much appreciated,i do have my fair share of woamn problems Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hampi Posted April 24, 2005 Share Posted April 24, 2005 Sorry mate the days of nu metal lyrics are gone Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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