O'Laigh Posted October 22, 2005 Share Posted October 22, 2005 (edited) Knocking on heavens door courseworkHey last year for my music tech course i tried to record sweet child o'mine but unfortunatly assholes let me down and they couldn't play it. These are the same people that slay me for liking Guns and roses when they like music because a certain person thinks it's cool what a load of fuck Nuggets. It's me singing and it's my acoustic voice lol P.s Feedback would be goodany way here's a poem of mine as wellHesitationAnd here I am, here I stand,I shall have my right to passion,I will not buckle to society’s demand,Grant them rendezvous or liaison,For they’d paint the rose black,Give birth to a colourless dominionAnd never cease their vicious attack.These words a thousand times thoughtRemain however unsummoned to the tongue.My hesitation has me falling short,A sigh where words belong.No fire flung from the heart,My mouth and Furness not as oneBut lie in silence inharmoniously apart.Why is our inclination to be alone,Hiding within our frames we oppressOurselves to the dungeons we roam,Far from faithful happiness ?In time I wish to come to beA man who can unashamedly confessHis passions for life, for thee. Edited October 22, 2005 by O'Laigh Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
gnrbest Posted October 22, 2005 Share Posted October 22, 2005 KOOL Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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