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I´m not afraid anymore

you I´ll explore

make myself at home

and watch the show

a tender crack

hides the greater pain

displays a face

but you don´t understand

everything at once

the core

of it all

is painted with grace

the core

the core

behind that frame

hides an unspoken dream

you judge to live

so what is it that you give?

I´ll find you

I´ll break you

you can´t make me

I won´t let you

I won´t take you

you can´t help me

was it the power of God

or a hope that the lord

no he doesn´t forgive

forgiving is a sin

I´m not afraid anymore

I found the core

there´s nothing more

the show is off

Strawberry Slut

she drinks champagne

from a hand made glass

but why does it seem

as if if she drinks

from a paper cup

she´s a strawberry slut

she´s a strawberry slut

the image is clear

the only one who fits her company

is a smiling dead president

and a pocket full of coke

she drinks champagne

from a hand made glass

but why does it seem

as if if she drinks

from a paper cup

she´s a strawberry slut

she´s a strawberry slut

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ok, it's obvious that you have some talent for writing but this reads more like poetry than lyrics, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. Jim Morrison was told the same thing. I remember you said you like Jeff Buckley and i can see some of that influence in this writing. It's just really hard to judge lyrics sometimes without a melody.

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ok, it's obvious that you have some talent for writing but this reads more like poetry than lyrics, which isn't necessarily a bad thing. Jim Morrison was told the same thing. I remember you said you like Jeff Buckley and i can see some of that influence in this writing. It's just really hard to judge lyrics sometimes without a melody.

true... :) but it's kinda strange you pulled the Buckley comparison out. I thought about him a little when I wrote it. And yes, I'm a big fan of his! :)

maybe it is more poetry than lyrics. :P I dunno... sometimes you can sing it, sometimes not. :)

I wanna do some dylan stuff tho. :D that'd be rad! ;)

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deadly hush blown across

faces of unknowns

around the table you've lost

now it's cold,

who knew the cost

of swinging the thought

it's an uncomfortable silence

not that anyone talks

it's probably best like this

now that nobody talks

They knew that they ought to

But the hate sought bloomed

it grew out of control

and now

nobody wants to know

just what they've done

it's an uncomfortable silence

not that anyone talks

it's probably best like this

now that nobody talks

cast a shadow upon that face

it'll wither in time

hate grows down your spine

sun, shine

sun, shine

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