shootingstar Posted February 15, 2008 Share Posted February 15, 2008 (edited) And I said a hit, not a masterpiece.So this is it (youtube) Edited February 16, 2008 by shootingstar Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quadlaser Posted February 15, 2008 Share Posted February 15, 2008 Pretty sweet, keep it up.Liven up the bass, it's kinda boring. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shootingstar Posted February 15, 2008 Author Share Posted February 15, 2008 Pretty sweet, keep it up.Liven up the bass, it's kinda boring.Thanks:) Will register your opinion Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
FunkyMonk Posted February 15, 2008 Share Posted February 15, 2008 Not my type of music, but it's real good. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shootingstar Posted February 16, 2008 Author Share Posted February 16, 2008 Not my type of music, but it's real good.Actually, not mine either. Just a strategic move from our side Not something I would expect GNR fans to like, we have other songs that would fit the taste of the GNR community better. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevin Posted February 16, 2008 Share Posted February 16, 2008 I like this type of music . But I think the singer should try to "poppen" the vocals, meaning sing more poppy and sceney if possible. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assassin's Creed Posted February 16, 2008 Share Posted February 16, 2008 Its like a cross over betweeen 80's commerical popmetal and HIM modern rock...The chorus should be more outspoken ,cuz a hit single = sing along chorus , an example of a chorus you need to take as example would porbably be "I hate everything about you" by 3 days grace. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shootingstar Posted February 16, 2008 Author Share Posted February 16, 2008 (edited) Its like a cross over betweeen 80's commerical popmetal and HIM modern rock...The chorus should be more outspoken ,cuz a hit single = sing along chorus , an example of a chorus you need to take as example would porbably be "I hate everything about you" by 3 days grace.You really have a point there. Thank you all for your opinions:)We have considered to put some more arrangements on the second half of the vereses.. Like some melody in background that building up the whole thing before the chorus. Can that be something?? Edited February 22, 2008 by shootingstar Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Assassin's Creed Posted February 16, 2008 Share Posted February 16, 2008 Have the bass mimic the drums instead of the electric guitar , Bass and drums have a chemistry , they should be together , The chorus you kinda go into a mellow tone , instead why dont you change the song's arangement there to have a louder chorus , you need it to be rockin , upbeat ,energetic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pain cake Posted February 17, 2008 Share Posted February 17, 2008 Ooh impressive vocals. Yeah I could see it having moderate commercial success in Brisbane Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
shootingstar Posted February 20, 2008 Author Share Posted February 20, 2008 (edited) Ooh impressive vocals. Yeah I could see it having moderate commercial success in Brisbane As I´m the singer, that touched my heart. But there are songs that I´m much more pleased with my performance. I have more of a rock voice, but in this song I had to try really hard to make it sound more popish Edited February 20, 2008 by shootingstar Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Perfect_crime49 Posted February 21, 2008 Share Posted February 21, 2008 Chorus is pretty catchy. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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