sweetness Posted August 16, 2007 Share Posted August 16, 2007 http://www.sendspace.com/file/7cliv5This is the instrumental version of a song me and my brother origionaly wrote about our neighbor across the street. I took the vocals out because... well, theres no way in hell I could be taken seriously if they were there. Its pretty basic, just a simple little rock song, but its one of the few recordings of me that I actually have on my computer so I figured I'd post it here and see what feedback I get. We did this all in my computer room so the bass and drums are just loops from ACID Music Maker, therefore theyre repetitive as hell, but the guitar is all me. So yeah, let me know what yall think Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kill_YourIdols Posted August 16, 2007 Share Posted August 16, 2007 i liked it, good ol' rock n' roll B) the solo was really good too but you need to lay it some vocals Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
swlabr Posted August 17, 2007 Share Posted August 17, 2007 Sounds good overall. You should add a couple of quick licks in the verses, maybe improvise around the chords. it gets kind of repetitive. sweet solo, man. overall, great stuff. better than anything i can do. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sweetness Posted August 17, 2007 Author Share Posted August 17, 2007 Thanks for the feedback guysYeah, the verses do get pretty repetitive, anything to make them not seem as long would be nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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