Malicious Matt Posted November 14, 2008 Share Posted November 14, 2008 For my "bands" first real song. Even though we haven't finished it yet, (not even a chorus yet) I put it up so that hopefully we would be able to get some feedback on the song itself. Whether the vocals are strong enough, good lyrics, that sort of thing. Band is called Gunsmith by the way, and we would really appreciate any help. Thanks!Gunsmith Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lawzy Posted November 14, 2008 Share Posted November 14, 2008 (edited) Sounds decent enough. Get the vocals in tune and thats a solid verse IMO. Vocal melody isn't too repetitive which is a good thing(something that Axl is very good at!)Keep working at it! Best advice is to make sure you keep finishing tracks with all verses etc. The more you get done the better you get! Nobody starts out with Sweet Child O' Mine or Novemeber Rain Edited November 14, 2008 by Lawzy Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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