COUPLE OF MY BANDS SONGS

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Give me a sign:

1. nail the singing, hit the notes you try to hit.

2. rewrite the lyrics. parts of it is like... ugh...

3. add another guitar

4. mix up the drums

5. reduce the reverb

6. rerecord.

answer

The song is OK, it never kicks off.... it´s kinda like JJ Gilmour JK

your voice is quite ok... but like I said, re-arrange the song.

Keep it burning:

try singing it a little higher pitched. you kinda get sucked into it. and try to vary the vocals a bit.

see if you can add a bit gain and sing it lower but still higher, kinda in a mix or a falsetto.

TIP OF THE DAY:

You can bounce songs in Pro Tools to where u get L and R channel into just one track

[HOLDEN CAULFIELD]

http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fusea...iendID=87164219

Give me a sign:

1. nail the singing, hit the notes you try to hit.

2. rewrite the lyrics. parts of it is like... ugh...

3. add another guitar

4. mix up the drums

5. reduce the reverb

6. rerecord.

answer

The song is OK, it never kicks off.... it´s kinda like JJ Gilmour JK

your voice is quite ok... but like I said, re-arrange the song.

Keep it burning:

try singing it a little higher pitched. you kinda get sucked into it. and try to vary the vocals a bit.

see if you can add a bit gain and sing it lower but still higher, kinda in a mix or a falsetto.

TIP OF THE DAY:

You can bounce songs in Pro Tools to where u get L and R channel into just one track

ok cheers man good advice way more informative than what i thought i would get i will forward you comments too the singer