Delightful Melodi

[shootingstar]

Well this is a song a wrote...

English isn´t my mother tounge(I´m swedish) and ability to speak english is under national average so..

I just want to know if this is out i question or acceptable...?

Delightful Melodi

U try to bring it to your plane

See your perfect smile would change

When it´s time to be subsurface

U keep it under

I keep it breed

Lack of communication need

To scrape through your fragile surface

C:

And when I look that delightful melodi

Hits me

Oh, I must leave this all behind

So many questions been answered

But still I don´t beleve

Those things don´t need to be rewinded

You´re a blinder play with me

I will show how you can be

Putted under and defeated

But when I´ve dragged you down that hole

People claim that I´m to cold

You´re an Angel

I´m the evil(devil)

C:

Cause when they look that delightful melodi

Hits them

Oh, why must they be so blinded

So many questions been answered

But still I don´t beleve

Those things don´t need to be rewinded