conorfitz Posted April 29, 2007 Share Posted April 29, 2007 http://www.bebo.com/FlashBox.jsp?FlashView...erId=1837797357comments appreciated!!thanks. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aidlook Posted April 29, 2007 Share Posted April 29, 2007 Work on your timing and feel a bit. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
axlslash Posted April 30, 2007 Share Posted April 30, 2007 1) TIMING - you start and end each phrase WAY too early2) You're missing a ton of notes in the lower part Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Inverted Mind Posted April 30, 2007 Share Posted April 30, 2007 It was decentI say work on your timing and bends though Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sweetness Posted April 30, 2007 Share Posted April 30, 2007 (edited) timing, bends, and you missed the chords in the introEDIT: and thats all been said already so my post is pointless Edited April 30, 2007 by sweetness Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pain cake Posted April 30, 2007 Share Posted April 30, 2007 Learn more too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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