MAFIA Posted October 16, 2007 Share Posted October 16, 2007 I did write over 500 songs in past 2yearsThis is some of it.Please tell ur opinnionI do also music but im not that good ,im little better with lyrics .So here are some.For starts 3 songsALWAYS WITH YOUAlways with youI've been in love so many times I'm never gonna fall in love again For you i'm forced to spend my life writting you love rhymesI have you my heart so easilyNow i feel like my heart is traped inside love chainI know there is one thing you feel the sameUnfortunately its not my love,my heart or memory on my name...I never want to be alone ,so baby why...?Dont you let me try again,couse' baby ...!! i cant ,i cant (whisper)I cant live knowing you have never been mine....Always with youTake me to the place we knowBring me to life babyTake me to the place where wind doesnt blowBring me hunger to live babytake me to the place of where is no sun and is continuous snowAlways with you ( scream )Always with you uuuuuuu ( scream continiously)Always with you Always with youAlways with youGod Damn'it...!!!I've been in love so many times I have protected our love by making many crimesNow ..! I have destroyed my life by alcohol and cocainNow ..! I'm never gonna fall in love againBeaten like a dead horse i'am loosing my life in veinAlways with youTake me to the place we knowGive me last chance babyTake me to the place belowGive me one more try babyTake me in a world that we dont' knowAlways with you ( scream )Always with you uuuuuuu ( scream continiously)Always with you Always with youAlways with youGod Damn'it...!!!Broken Glass And CigarettesYes i have take ttitle from song we all knowBroken glass and cigarettes Sitting here in a room Looking through the broken windowFeeling ,seeing this is it,this is my final doom.....Sitting here in a dark roomRemembering a time u were here ,remembering my youth bloom Thinking of a suicide ,thinking will u remember me then thinking will u visit my tomb....As im sinking futher and futher awayHoping i will be able to stand up and kill myselfkill myself with this last sway...Couse'all i have left is my broken glass and cigarettesOh baby,no more,no more mistakes.....As im sinking futher and futher awayPlease baby,dont leave me ,please baby staycause' all i am left is my broken glass and cigarettesIf you leave me and go away all my life chance are of the betsLighting up my last cigaretteThinking of a day we have met....oh babyTell me ,will my blood be enough,will my wound be wet?Oh my baby ,dont you ever forget....that i have been your worse regret.....Couse' now i left only with my broken glass and cigarettesIn my life you have entered as a good looking brunetteDay i met you my life gone wild,my world you have upset..From the day i have met you i have been broke down every glass and smoke my life as it was a single cigarette ODE TO DIMEYes ,that will be D.DarrellThere Was A Time ( ode to Dime)There was a time When God visiting this worldthere was a time when killing someone was a crime....There was a timeWhen people was less filled with the slime...oh,there was a time....there was a timewhen people didnt do warsthere was a time ..!!!when people didnt wait in a line......to be judged for a war crime....There was a timesWhen great musicians writed one of best rhyme'suntil they took that timeto kill,destroy,poison and take the prime...Left us all in a missery,sadness,knowing we lost our dear beloved dime....Always on our minds,alway in our heartCowboys from hell still ride for you....We've lost our brother...Still echo in my mind...Feeling ,like i've lost my mother....missing u dear brotherMetal missing you,knowing there wont be another!!!!Always on our minds,alway in our heartCowboys from hell still ride for you....There was a timeWhen a man knowed to use his guitarthere was a timewhen was born a biggest rock star....Until they took the time He lost his guitarhis death was so bizzareand left us biggest scar....Always on our minds,alway in our heartCowboys from hell still ride for you...We miss you brother!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UseYourAppetite Posted October 16, 2007 Share Posted October 16, 2007 Hell, I'm impressed man, pretty good songs. I like the little homage to TWAT too Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MAFIA Posted October 17, 2007 Author Share Posted October 17, 2007 Thanks a lot.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
droezle Posted October 17, 2007 Share Posted October 17, 2007 Impressing. Thumbs up M. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MAFIA Posted October 17, 2007 Author Share Posted October 17, 2007 Ok thenHere is 1 moreLast GoodbyeFriends,love,family...i dont know whyBut this song is last tear for you that i cry...As i cut my wrists this is last song i sing youbefore i give you my last goodbye.....The time has come for me to go awayCouse no more words i have left for you to say...Tears,pain and blood i lost for you without a reasonAll you give me back was a simple treason ...This is my last goodbye ..Couse' i lost all of me belief in your lieMy life you have used ,my heart you have abused...The time has come for me to say you goodbyeI left you my body wich you have bruisedeven i have been wrongly accused....You never show me anything good to do or learnNow ,for you in hell my soul burn.....This is my last goodbyeFriends,love,family...i dont know whyBut this song is last tear for you that i cry...As i stab knife thru my heart this is last song i sing youbefore i give you my last goodbye.....Every good word to me you have spokeNow it seems like it was a world biggest jokeMy heart you have brokeAnd now my life burnout in a single smoke....This is my last goodbyeFriends,love,family...i dont know whyBut this song is last tear for you that i cry...As i cut my throat this is last song i sing youbefore i give you my last goodbye.....PS.And no ,i'm not EMO ,lol....I just write what is on my mind and stuff what i see ,what i feel ,what i realize.Many of my songs are little deeper then you may think after you read it 1-2 times Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gods Favourite Posted October 17, 2007 Share Posted October 17, 2007 Like the Dimebag one. Nice written Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UseYourAppetite Posted October 17, 2007 Share Posted October 17, 2007 Good stuff again man Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Black Sabbath Posted October 18, 2007 Share Posted October 18, 2007 Really good man! It's different reading lyrics not know how they are to be sung though...But I really like the 'Broken Glass And Cigarettes' one! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MAFIA Posted October 18, 2007 Author Share Posted October 18, 2007 Well i can write how i see them played i cant put mp3 when its not done or music when im not satisfied with any i write and i want best for my lyrics.But here is one more song:SONG : BLACKENINGVocal: Should be someone like Dave Mustain on song Sleepwalker or Alexi Laiho on song ARE YOU DEAD YETRitam: Between Aesthetic of hate by machine head and Day Of Reckoning by Testament Guitar: hard,very hard metalIts is Power Metal song ,well should be And it should be played with hateBlackeningWhen it comes to you,what will u do.....When it takes all u haveWill u remember these onesThat once has been known as braveU think u can have anythingThen suddenly u lost everythingYour Life has been pure and whiteNow your destiny is to suffer a bad lifeSo you have been stricken' out ?..?Walk all over the earthThink of past timesWhat could u haveWhat u left outWay of a world ,has left u apartLeft and lonely to suffer it out.....My LifeI had moneyI had friendsI had loveI had fameNow left out,to point fingers ,and to blame.............?...!Blackening is the way to leaveBlackening is my only fearRage from within' my soulScreaming for a lightBut its to lateCouse' now is time to leaveOne step from death ,i call myself once againAs i fade awayIn BLACKENING .......!!!Your LifeU have moneyU have friendsU have loveU have fameSoon left out,with no fingers to point ,and no eyes to see whom to blame............?...!Blackening..........U cant escape,it will get ya...... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MAFIA Posted October 18, 2007 Author Share Posted October 18, 2007 BLACK HEARTBlack HeartThis is a story of a creature that you areYour life gave my egsistance a life scarArise from human painYour egsistance gave my lifes biggest blood stainYour good looking body and gorgeouse faceLeft my life nothin' but feelin' disgraceAll of your muse looks in everyday daylightYou have turned into a devil in everyinght moonlightBlack HeartDamn you devil ,damn you and your poisoned dartBlack HeartDamn you devil,damn you and your twisted way of artBlack Heart Damn you devil,couse' you have take my life apartDamn you black heart.....I feel you everytime i lay down in my bedI feel you then ,couse i feel like i am dead I dream of you everytime i feel sleepyI know i dream of you ,couse' i always dream of someone creepyBlack HeartShe was a woman yet before she become creatureShe was a student before she sold her life to devils teacherNow when she took my life,i always know when shes nearI know,because my heart stops and all i feel is fear ,fear,fear (scream)Now when she took my life i always know when shes nearI know,becaouse i can smell hell and my eyes fill up with tear Black HeartSo close and so near,yet someone that you should be fearBlack heartDemonic girl living in hell in her little spider netYet so powerfull she can make fire of sun wetI feel you everytime i lay down in my bedI feel you then ,couse i feel like i am dead I dream of you everytime i feel sleepyI know i dream of you ,couse' i always dream of someone creepyBlack heartBlack HeartBlack Heart Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MAFIA Posted October 21, 2007 Author Share Posted October 21, 2007 My new songI HATEI HateI hateEvery moment of our first dateI hateFeeling all you did was take me as a baitI hateEvery time you have not come on time and i have to waitI hateMyself because i still feel like you are my life's fateThere is a thin line between love and hateMistress of a dark with my love you have dictateAnd in my life you have released an update full of hate.....(breaking moment,speed guitar solo)Every time i think about you Is moment i know my love for you is nothing more than trueEvery time i look in your eyesI see a million of broken hearts,i see devil in disguiseI hateEvery moment i thought together we are greatI hateMyself because now i am a monster which you helped createI hate ....(long scream )....I hate everything about youSo why do i still love you...?U hate everything about meSo why dont you let me heart finaly freeI hate you......There is a thin line between love and hateMistress of a dark with my love you have dictateAnd in my life you have relese update full of hate.....(breaking moment,speed guitar solo)Every time i think about you I feel happy , i feel newBut everytime i look into your eyesI see nights with millions of guysMany of them have fallen,but none have rised....Oh mistress of a dark I hate everything about youSo please let me free,let me pass through .... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MAFIA Posted October 22, 2007 Author Share Posted October 22, 2007 Song title: NatashaSong genre: Emotional baladaRhythm: Slow blues with touch note from classic rock Voice: Crispy voice ,deep but yet clean ,in Mercury ''pretender'' styleNATASHAIt’s sad, so sadIt is a miracle when i thought about the good times we hadIt's sad,so sadIt is a pain when i thought how many times you have made me madNow ....!!!Lost in my own imaginationEverythin' bad inside me is your creationIt seemsSorry seems to be the hardest word to sayFallen apart and left to wonder around looking for another wayNow theres no point in placing the blameAnd you should know I suffer the sameLove is a birdso let it flyFriendship u cannot buySo dont let it dieNow ....!!!Lost in my own imaginationEverythin' bad inside me is your creationIt's seemSorry seems to be the hardest word to sayLeft alone with a broken heart ,left alone to begin a new startSorry seems to be the hardest word to sayBut i'll be there for youDont you ever forget,me and you ,we're like a crewBut i'll be there for youDont you ever deny that my feelings was not trueBut i'll be there for youcause we both know that friendship isnt something you can throwNow ....!!!Lost in my own imaginationEverythin' bad inside me is your creationIt's seemSorry seems to be the hardest word to sayNatasha.................. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Becket Posted October 22, 2007 Share Posted October 22, 2007 Very Impresive I wish I had talent to write like that. I couldnt write a song worth shit.I really liked them. Good job MAFIA Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MAFIA Posted October 22, 2007 Author Share Posted October 22, 2007 Thank youAlso SO SAD SEEMS TO BE HARDEST WORD TO SAYI took from Elton John songs becaouse i'am huge fan of his lyrics. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Becket Posted October 22, 2007 Share Posted October 22, 2007 Yes Elton does have some damn good lyrics. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maddy158 Posted October 26, 2007 Share Posted October 26, 2007 (edited) ...quite average.but not bad considering english isnt your first language. Edited October 26, 2007 by Maddy158 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MAFIA Posted October 27, 2007 Author Share Posted October 27, 2007 (edited) English spelling inside songs is quite perfectNew songTIES THAT BINDTies that bindFuck you !!!Shut up God damn'itFuck you !!I dont have nothing to sayBut somehow you always find a wayTo come and destroy my prayTo come in my life,come and stayWell fuck you !!!! ( scream)Fuck you I hate youI hate the feeling that you can feelI hate seeing when u kneelI hate knowing that you are real....Well.....i hate you!!!Fuck you !!! ( scream )Go away ,i hate you so fuck you Fuck you !! ( scream)I hate seeing your icy windI hate knowing my life become ties that bindI hate having you on my mindI fucking hate you and your kindSo fuck you ...go with the wind and dont come backGod damn'it ( screaming loudest )Everytime i go to sleepI hear you and your weepEverytime i dreamI hear you dying in a screamEverytime i finnaly feel fineYou come with your icy wind , and destroy all that is mineI HATE YOUSO FUCK YOUFUCK YOUUUUUUUUU!!!I dedicate this song for to idiots out there ,you know who you are!Bitch!! Edited October 27, 2007 by MAFIA Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maddy158 Posted October 28, 2007 Share Posted October 28, 2007 (edited) I wasnt talking about spellingthe lyrics are very average , most are quite cliched,basic english.nothing special , and the way you incorpated "god damit" was really dire.and a few dont make sense. Edited October 28, 2007 by Maddy158 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MAFIA Posted October 28, 2007 Author Share Posted October 28, 2007 Well first i thought that every criticism is good criticism but after i read your ( highway blues or what the hell is your double nickname) i realize that even my worst song is better then your work as musican,so please.... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maddy158 Posted October 28, 2007 Share Posted October 28, 2007 (edited) im not highway bluesim his brother , and although i dont like my brother much , his lyric didint have cliches atleast whilst urs are overloaded with them.if your not gona tolerate criticism then why post? Edited October 28, 2007 by Maddy158 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MAFIA Posted October 28, 2007 Author Share Posted October 28, 2007 Couse when criticism coming from someone so un talented as you and your brother or who the hell are you in the end ,anyway from one of your alter egos then it isnt gonna be toleratedFirst go and learn to play guitar + sing + write lyrics and music = give criticism Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maddy158 Posted October 28, 2007 Share Posted October 28, 2007 (edited) dude a few below mediocre lyrics wirh nog singing or guitar , does not qualify you to make any type of judgementuntil you give us something finished then start calling poeple un talented.p.s he got a tip from Richard fortus through email when he sent him the clip looking for advice,richard gave him a alternate tuning wich gave the same sound with a crisp tuningand then went on to comment that his ideas where great. again if u cant take honest critisicm dont post . Edited October 28, 2007 by Maddy158 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MAFIA Posted October 28, 2007 Author Share Posted October 28, 2007 Listen dude.Ad highvoltageacdc told you ,dont make every thread you post in A BASHING THREADAnd i told everyone i suck in playing guitar and making music,im good as vocal and writing lyrics also i dont have band so i cannot show you my work ,im not profesional or i ever sayed i am good in anything,i just decided to share some of my poems to people on mygnr,if u mind that sorry but u cant do anything about that.Just do me favoure and leave from this topic. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Maddy158 Posted October 28, 2007 Share Posted October 28, 2007 (edited) pardon me?i posted my honest thougtsyou went into a hissy fiti didint start anything , you did. Edited October 28, 2007 by Maddy158 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
UseYourAppetite Posted October 28, 2007 Share Posted October 28, 2007 They're very good as I already said, keep them coming MAFIA Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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