w 23 axl Posted February 25, 2006 Share Posted February 25, 2006 http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=186344my reactions after listening to Better. if you want to add to it, please do so....tell me what u think, and especially if there are any singers out there and u want to work on this, DO SO!!!!!tell me what u guys think......click the first song, F G A Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Slash66 Posted February 25, 2006 Share Posted February 25, 2006 http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=186344my reactions after listening to Better. if you want to add to it, please do so....tell me what u think, and especially if there are any singers out there and u want to work on this, DO SO!!!!!tell me what u guys think......click the first song, F G AI dig it...I like the lead guitar overtop...."one small step for man..." heh... rock1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
w 23 axl Posted February 25, 2006 Author Share Posted February 25, 2006 u like the lead, really? i always felt that was my biggest weakness, ive only been playing for 6 yrs. thanks though! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
mr. orangestone Posted February 25, 2006 Share Posted February 25, 2006 (edited) if i knew how I'd like to add a lead onto that.the lead isnt that bad, it just isn't too exciting, you don't do a lot in it. I've been playing a little over 4 years but I'm a good lead player. Edited February 27, 2006 by mr. orangestone Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
w 23 axl Posted February 25, 2006 Author Share Posted February 25, 2006 well, there never really is a "solo"...there's no spot thats just supposed to be guitar....the half-time bridge is supposed to have vocals around it, its just supposed to take up some background space....imagine vocals there.....all lead guitar lines are meant to go along-side the vocals..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Millmoor Posted February 26, 2006 Share Posted February 26, 2006 http://www.soundclick.com/bands/pagemusic.cfm?bandID=186344my reactions after listening to Better. if you want to add to it, please do so....tell me what u think, and especially if there are any singers out there and u want to work on this, DO SO!!!!!tell me what u guys think......click the first song, F G Awhat tha hell is the song called? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
w 23 axl Posted February 26, 2006 Author Share Posted February 26, 2006 no name yet, i guess that depends on vocals!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackamo! Posted February 26, 2006 Share Posted February 26, 2006 (edited) I wrote some lyrics for your song, but it's not done yetUNTITLEDIf I could say one thing, Just one thing, To the one I desireWhat could I say, oh, What should I sayIf I could say one thing, Just one thing, To prove I'm not a liarWhat could I say, oh, What should I sayI loved you, yeah, that's what I would sayI shoved you off, yeah, to start a new dayI just had to take a small step for mankind, ohI just had to leave you behindoh, leave you behindoh, even if I could change the timeI still wouldn't rewind, oh, ohCause I made up my mind, so, soCould you act like you never, ever met meTry to forget me, oh, try to forget meWhy did you let me, oh, why did you let me goOh, let me go Edited February 26, 2006 by jackamo! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hogg2500 Posted February 26, 2006 Share Posted February 26, 2006 I wrote some lyrics for your song, but it's not done yetUNTITLEDIf I could say one thing, Just one thing, To the one I desireWhat could I say, oh, What should I sayIf I could say one thing, Just one thing, To prove I'm not a liarWhat could I say, oh, What should I sayI loved you, yeah, that's what I would sayI shoved you off, yeah, to start a new dayI just had to take a small step for mankind, ohI just had to leave you behindoh, leave you behindoh, even if I could change the timeI still wouldn't rewind, oh, ohCause I made up my mind, so, soCould you act like you never, ever met meTry to forget me, oh, try to forget meWhy did you let me, oh, why did you let me goOh, let me gohmm... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
slashs_servant Posted February 26, 2006 Share Posted February 26, 2006 I wrote some lyrics for your song, but it's not done yetUNTITLEDIf I could say one thing, Just one thing, To the one I desireWhat could I say, oh, What should I sayIf I could say one thing, Just one thing, To prove I'm not a liarWhat could I say, oh, What should I sayI loved you, yeah, that's what I would sayI shoved you off, yeah, to start a new dayI just had to take a small step for mankind, ohI just had to leave you behindoh, leave you behindoh, even if I could change the timeI still wouldn't rewind, oh, ohCause I made up my mind, so, soCould you act like you never, ever met meTry to forget me, oh, try to forget meWhy did you let me, oh, why did you let me goOh, let me goGreat lyrics. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quadlaser Posted February 26, 2006 Share Posted February 26, 2006 bucket came over my house and recorded some parts.well, actually it's just me showing off , feel free to steal any riffs, if i had a better mic, i would've tried harder, because you don't want this on your final project, well, maybe some of it, if you're good at editing.cool song, by the wayhttp://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=17QKSIV...XP1DV1JXA2JZDVZ Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AxlisOld Posted February 26, 2006 Share Posted February 26, 2006 Lil bit of a Yngwie fan are we Quad? Man, you and I would have one hell of a guitar battle if we got into it. Then again I'm not a sweeper, but I bet I could tap somethin fierce around ya rock1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Millmoor Posted February 26, 2006 Share Posted February 26, 2006 I wrote some lyrics for your song, but it's not done yetUNTITLEDIf I could say one thing, Just one thing, To the one I desireWhat could I say, oh, What should I sayIf I could say one thing, Just one thing, To prove I'm not a liarWhat could I say, oh, What should I sayI loved you, yeah, that's what I would sayI shoved you off, yeah, to start a new dayI just had to take a small step for mankind, ohI just had to leave you behindoh, leave you behindoh, even if I could change the timeI still wouldn't rewind, oh, ohCause I made up my mind, so, soCould you act like you never, ever met meTry to forget me, oh, try to forget meWhy did you let me, oh, why did you let me goOh, let me goGreat lyrics.uhm... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackamo! Posted February 26, 2006 Share Posted February 26, 2006 (edited) what's with all the "umm's" about my lyrics?the first 4 lines are like really good, the rest needs work though...If I could say one thing, just one thing, to the one that I desireWhat could I say, oh, what should I sayIf I could say one thing, just one thing, to prove that I'm not a liarWhat could I say, oh, what should I sayAnd like the music, it's inspired by axl's new material, like "Better" Edited February 26, 2006 by jackamo! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackamo! Posted February 26, 2006 Share Posted February 26, 2006 bucket came over my house and recorded some parts.well, actually it's just me showing off , feel free to steal any riffs, if i had a better mic, i would've tried harder, because you don't want this on your final project, well, maybe some of it, if you're good at editing.cool song, by the wayhttp://s38.yousendit.com/d.aspx?id=17QKSIV...XP1DV1JXA2JZDVZit still needs some keyboards, and of course vocals. Someone should try to extend the song to past 4 minutes though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Millmoor Posted February 26, 2006 Share Posted February 26, 2006 what's with all the "umm's" about my lyrics?the first 4 lines are like really good, the rest needs work though...If I could say one thing, just one thing, to the one that I desireWhat could I say, oh, what should I sayIf I could say one thing, just one thing, to prove that I'm not a liarWhat could I say, oh, what should I sayAnd like the music, it's inspired by axl's new material, like "Better"I don´t see the connection between better and that song. Honestly, it´s more like RedHotChilliPeppers meets Metal..... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
abitestranged Posted February 26, 2006 Share Posted February 26, 2006 Great song!What did you use for the drums? software? what kind? etc... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jackamo! Posted February 27, 2006 Share Posted February 27, 2006 A couple more lines...If I could say one thing, just one thing, to the one that I desireWhat could I say, oh, what should I sayIf I could say one thing, just one thing, to prove that I'm not a liarWhat could I say, oh, what should I sayI no longer have a safe place to hide, since I don't have youI have felt my heart melt from deep inside, since I don't have youOh, I do not know what to do, what to do, You no longer answer your phone, when you hear the toneYou make me feel so alone, so alone You no longer answer your phone, I know your homeYou make me feel so alone, so aloneI no longer have a safe place to hide, since I don't have youI have felt my heart melt from deep inside, since I don't have youOh, I do not know what to do, oh, what to do, Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quadlaser Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 (edited) Lil bit of a Yngwie fan are we Quad? Man, you and I would have one hell of a guitar battle if we got into it. Then again I'm not a sweeper, but I bet I could tap somethin fierce around ya rock1 i'd own you!but seriously, you pretty much nailed that irs solo, you're certainly good as hell, if i ever get some decent recording shit i'd be down for the duel. i'm a pretty good tapper (i can even sweep tap) but i can't do any of that 2-3 or 4 finger tapping shit yet.you should practice your sweeping though, i've only just started doing that about 2 months ago. i got a good video if you want... Edited February 28, 2006 by quadlaser Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AxlisOld Posted February 28, 2006 Share Posted February 28, 2006 Man I'm fucking drunk right now. Your modesty is admerable. Honestly I started to learn sweeping and never really found a practical use for it, so I didn't progress with it much further. I can maybe sweep mediocrely (if thats a word) and I do appreciate the compliment. I can Actually do multifinger tapping, and what I've noticed is that many guitarists, use a gimmick like that (or sweeping) as their little "trick" that they do. Whoooooo!!!!! Natural Ice rules!!!!!!!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
w 23 axl Posted March 2, 2006 Author Share Posted March 2, 2006 thanks for the comments on my song, im just not sure why people keep saying it sounds like RHCP.....why? b/c of the clean guitar over the verse?to me, its more like a combo of GnR and Garbage. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
zepsun Posted March 2, 2006 Share Posted March 2, 2006 I got lyrics...Gonna record vocals over the next few days...It'll be good...if u want Axl-style...u'll have it.The poem/song/lyrics is titled "Guilt Trip"... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tyler Drama Posted March 2, 2006 Share Posted March 2, 2006 I Like This Song A Lot. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
w 23 axl Posted March 2, 2006 Author Share Posted March 2, 2006 if u can record vocals, that would be great!!! send it to us ASAP, im excited to hear it!!!!!i recorded the song a few days after Better blew me off my chair! live guitars, live bass, synth samples, programmed drums.....used Sony Vegas for live recordingsused Sony Acid for all sample work, including the speech clips....im glad u guys like the song! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
dingodick Posted March 3, 2006 Share Posted March 3, 2006 if u can record vocals, that would be great!!! send it to us ASAP, im excited to hear it!!!!!i recorded the song a few days after Better blew me off my chair! live guitars, live bass, synth samples, programmed drums.....used Sony Vegas for live recordingsused Sony Acid for all sample work, including the speech clips....im glad u guys like the song!not to sound harsh on you bro, it indeed sounds like RHCP. it's just the twang and the sound to it, same chord-progressions and an incredibly overused and boring chorus. there's a nice tone to the verse, but it's rhcp. As for the vocals posted, you guys can't be serious about it....? for real??and for the speech bullshit... get over it, sounds like a dude tryin to hard... Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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