Chris Axl Posted August 6, 2007 Share Posted August 6, 2007 (edited) I recorded it with rhythm on my amp.Open for CONSTRUCTIVE criticismhttp://www.megaupload.com/?d=YHOYXN0F Edited August 7, 2007 by Chris Axl Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
kevdo242 Posted August 6, 2007 Share Posted August 6, 2007 Get a metronome, get your rhythm tight. Learn the scale used for the solo. Some parts of it are quite off key. Sounds like you're just picking random notes as fast as you can for effect. Keep practising. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris Axl Posted August 6, 2007 Author Share Posted August 6, 2007 (edited) Get a metronome, get your rhythm tight. Learn the scale used for the solo. Some parts of it are quite off key. Sounds like you're just picking random notes as fast as you can for effect. Keep practising.thanks.Yeah I tried making it kinda more shredding than it's supposed to. Edited August 6, 2007 by Chris Axl Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Iceman24 Posted August 6, 2007 Share Posted August 6, 2007 I'm impressed with your speed, but you struggle a bit with the rythm. Anyway, quite good I think. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
da_pope Posted August 6, 2007 Share Posted August 6, 2007 You see this is why you need less Bumblefoot and more Slash. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
highvoltage Posted August 6, 2007 Share Posted August 6, 2007 It's cool - you really need to work on your timing though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quadlaser Posted August 7, 2007 Share Posted August 7, 2007 mix up your phrasing when you improvise, and metronomeonline.com is a good site. the tone was nice. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
angel of death Posted August 7, 2007 Share Posted August 7, 2007 how long have you been playing? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pain cake Posted August 7, 2007 Share Posted August 7, 2007 I can't say anything that hasn't already been said, timing needs some work as well as learning your way around the fret board more. Your Harmonic's are pretty good and you deffinately give the guitar life, I can see you becoming a really good player, keep practicing Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris Axl Posted August 7, 2007 Author Share Posted August 7, 2007 thanks guys for feedbacks and compliments.I've been playing for like 2 n' a half years Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ssiscool Posted August 7, 2007 Share Posted August 7, 2007 damn my download is slow 10kbps i'll get back to you on this Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ssiscool Posted August 7, 2007 Share Posted August 7, 2007 right. not bad timing is again as previously stated off. but good otherwise Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
AxlsLover Posted August 7, 2007 Share Posted August 7, 2007 It feels like you're stressing to muych when you play. You're hanging right in the middle of just the right rythm/tempo and to fast. And when you play fast it sometimes sounds a little "grumsete" (don't know the english word ) Practise a lot on it very slow and then faster and faster, but DON'T rush Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris Axl Posted August 7, 2007 Author Share Posted August 7, 2007 thanks.I gotta let you guys know.... I just learned the solo. And didn't really try to play it like Slash plays, kinda trying to show more of how fast I can play.. But thanks for the tips everyone Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest Judas Posted August 7, 2007 Share Posted August 7, 2007 nah thats poor. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris Axl Posted August 7, 2007 Author Share Posted August 7, 2007 nah thats poor.are you serious man? Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mr_Oujamaflip Posted August 7, 2007 Share Posted August 7, 2007 thanks.I gotta let you guys know.... I just learned the solo. And didn't really try to play it like Slash plays, kinda trying to show more of how fast I can play.. But thanks for the tips everyoneIt's the wrong solo for speed showcasing really. Hmm, maybe something more Paradise City Outro would be suited for speed. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mrs Axl Posted August 7, 2007 Share Posted August 7, 2007 nah thats poor.The lad asked for 'constructive' critisism. If you think it was poor, then at least say what you thought was wrong with it so he can work on it. Otherwise it sounds like you dont really know what you're talking about. I'm not saying you dont - but just back up what you say is all I mean.I havent got time to listen to it right now Chris, but I will do so soon. I dont know much about guitar work though! (I cant play) but i'll know how it sounds to my ears Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forsaken Posted August 7, 2007 Share Posted August 7, 2007 Keep practicing Chris, you might be as good as me one day. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Raw Power Posted August 7, 2007 Share Posted August 7, 2007 (edited) November Rain solo this? No. Random notes, not very well pleyed, yes. Edited August 7, 2007 by Raw Power Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris Axl Posted August 7, 2007 Author Share Posted August 7, 2007 November Rain solo this? No. Random notes, not very well pleyed, yes.shred faster than you can ever dream of playing? yes Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
quadlaser Posted August 9, 2007 Share Posted August 9, 2007 Keep practicing Chris, you might be as good as me one day. pedobear!!! Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Chris Axl Posted August 9, 2007 Author Share Posted August 9, 2007 let me say this.... I haven't looked at any tabs or anything for the rythm, I just played so I had something under the solo. So don't judge it on that Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Forsaken Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 Keep practicing Chris, you might be as good as me one day. pedobear!!! :rofl-lol: Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Perfect_crime49 Posted August 10, 2007 Share Posted August 10, 2007 it weren't bad im just not big on the shred guitar stuff Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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