Popular Post lame ass security Posted June 11, 2020 Popular Post Share Posted June 11, 2020 (edited) I want to emphasize this also a demo. Some parts I'm not happy with, some I am. Chorus is pretty strong. Anyway, enjoy. Might have to crank it, the levels are low. Edited June 11, 2020 by lame ass security 7 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
soon Posted June 11, 2020 Share Posted June 11, 2020 Dude! This is awesome! I love your vocals and you weren't kidding about that chorus Also, that is my kind of guitar solo! When you get these tracks out there... dont forget to send us a postcard from the tour bus 1 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lame ass security Posted June 11, 2020 Author Share Posted June 11, 2020 Thanks man. Just want to clarify, I'm not playing on this track, just singing. 2 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Voodoochild Posted June 12, 2020 Share Posted June 12, 2020 I like the song and your vocals. I like the heavy guitar in the chorus and the outro solo, it reminded me a lot of Pearl Jam's Alive because of the chord progression. If you want my honest opinion though, I didn't care about the drums. The snare is was way too tight and it didn't sound good to my ears. The simplistic rhythm guitars in the verses were also kinda like there. I would rather use some more Hendrix-ish chords and licks to fill the space. Sure, that's just my personal opinion. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lame ass security Posted June 12, 2020 Author Share Posted June 12, 2020 1 hour ago, Voodoochild said: I like the song and your vocals. I like the heavy guitar in the chorus and the outro solo, it reminded me a lot of Pearl Jam's Alive because of the chord progression. If you want my honest opinion though, I didn't care about the drums. The snare is was way too tight and it didn't sound good to my ears. The simplistic rhythm guitars in the verses were also kinda like there. I would rather use some more Hendrix-ish chords and licks to fill the space. Sure, that's just my personal opinion. You're absolutely right, the things you mentioned are the issues I have also. But it is a demo and those things will definitely be addressed. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Gordon Comstock Posted June 13, 2020 Share Posted June 13, 2020 It's really good for a demo, especially the chorus and the outro. I agree about the drums though. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rocknroll41 Posted June 13, 2020 Share Posted June 13, 2020 Very nice! The production sounds super professional! And as always, the melody is very catchy! Keep up the good work 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
James Bond Posted June 16, 2020 Share Posted June 16, 2020 Once again the song is stellar and the vocals are a highlight. Seriously, I must sound like a broken record every time you post a new song or demo but you really do have a great voice. Constructively I will echo what the others have said about the drums. Very flat, very dry. Also I dig the licks in the chorus. That helps elevate it, but the verses are begging for some of that action too. The outro rocks! I almost wish it went on longer. That'd be killer for a live track. 1 Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lame ass security Posted June 16, 2020 Author Share Posted June 16, 2020 2 hours ago, James Bond said: Once again the song is stellar and the vocals are a highlight. Seriously, I must sound like a broken record every time you post a new song or demo but you really do have a great voice. Constructively I will echo what the others have said about the drums. Very flat, very dry. Also I dig the licks in the chorus. That helps elevate it, but the verses are begging for some of that action too. The outro rocks! I almost wish it went on longer. That'd be killer for a live track. Yeah, the drums are just kind of there. We just kind of set it up and rolled through, wanted to get a feel more than anything. Plus, I double tracked my vocals which was new, fun though. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
hudsonsaul Posted June 23, 2020 Share Posted June 23, 2020 Its a cool man, thanks for the heads up. Well done. IMO it could do with shrinking down to 3 to 3.5 min mark, whilst keeping the outtros, chorus', etc. But what do I know? Imagine it's hard to cull chunks, but to my ears it'd benefit from being a bit shorter. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
lame ass security Posted June 23, 2020 Author Share Posted June 23, 2020 13 minutes ago, hudsonsaul said: Its a cool man, thanks for the heads up. Well done. IMO it could do with shrinking down to 3 to 3.5 min mark, whilst keeping the outtros, chorus', etc. But what do I know? Imagine it's hard to cull chunks, but to my ears it'd benefit from being a bit shorter. No problem, I send out some DMs because no one checks out the musician's section.😄 Yeah, it could be tightened up a bit, we tried a tempo shift in the third verse but messed it up. Quote Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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